tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post2239487150243469056..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: It's in the Walls...hyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-79857365069413123372017-12-23T17:56:37.282+00:002017-12-23T17:56:37.282+00:00Good job, Anna. You write some pretty dark stuff a...Good job, Anna. You write some pretty dark stuff as I often do. I notice a common thread in your writings: women with low self esteem who give themselves to very bad men and end up dead. Life, lust, death...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-9134126866912476562017-11-21T06:13:29.136+00:002017-11-21T06:13:29.136+00:00It haunts the reader..so beautifully written :)It haunts the reader..so beautifully written :)Renu Vyashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17980281054247838797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-64169126573527802672017-11-20T23:28:23.142+00:002017-11-20T23:28:23.142+00:00I think of all the women who have lived behind tha...I think of all the women who have lived behind that door and my heart aches. I agree that it does have a Poeish feel. Nice work!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-77989956900486890732017-11-20T15:29:52.774+00:002017-11-20T15:29:52.774+00:00You leave me speechless....you are right, they are...You leave me speechless....you are right, they are all gone, good and evil, nothing to fear here, they are gone.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-36910456344762149882017-11-20T00:51:14.981+00:002017-11-20T00:51:14.981+00:00WOW! Applause, applause...
ZQWOW! Applause, applause...<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-43429979692703506022017-11-20T00:51:05.662+00:002017-11-20T00:51:05.662+00:00The rhyme and repetition enhance the fear and horr...The rhyme and repetition enhance the fear and horror mood of the story. Excellent poem.<br />PS<br />Thank goodness central heating is not necessary down here.Hope yours is fixed soonrallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-29165271224169180122017-11-20T00:03:31.227+00:002017-11-20T00:03:31.227+00:00This is brilliant writing. I really like what you...This is brilliant writing. I really like what you've done with the repetition of 'gone'. A well constructed, powerfully rendered piece!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-65978753457396934432017-11-19T23:11:18.551+00:002017-11-19T23:11:18.551+00:00Lives lived (more or less). Very nice
Lives lived (more or less). Very nice<br />goatmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02317617928368945316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-83393171170163457032017-11-19T22:22:48.349+00:002017-11-19T22:22:48.349+00:00The rhymes and cadence in this is spectacular. It...The rhymes and cadence in this is spectacular. It puts me in mind of Poe. It is sad to grow up with a drunkard. Sad for all involved. This tale is cold and chills like the winter wind.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-90393497882943331552017-11-19T21:22:29.941+00:002017-11-19T21:22:29.941+00:00A chilling one
Muchđź’–loveA chilling one<br /><br />Muchđź’–loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-63281391187946151652017-11-19T21:21:20.199+00:002017-11-19T21:21:20.199+00:00I feel the chill in this story....it will stay wit...I feel the chill in this story....it will stay with me!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-91293254255738749342017-11-19T20:33:29.809+00:002017-11-19T20:33:29.809+00:00My goodness this is absolutely chilling!! Great wr...My goodness this is absolutely chilling!! Great write!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-82213123279788846402017-11-19T19:58:34.847+00:002017-11-19T19:58:34.847+00:00A haunting! A murder mystery ode. A haunting! A murder mystery ode. colleen Looseleafnoteshttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-76683247073225752552017-11-19T18:17:20.855+00:002017-11-19T18:17:20.855+00:00WOW! This is a chilling tale, well told in few wo...WOW! This is a chilling tale, well told in few words. Bravo!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-13678957825828412682017-11-19T18:00:07.344+00:002017-11-19T18:00:07.344+00:00A wonderful rhythm and rhyme as life unfolds stark...A wonderful rhythm and rhyme as life unfolds starkly with your words.Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-77440065838472502402017-11-19T17:03:35.122+00:002017-11-19T17:03:35.122+00:00This reads very much like a murder ballad... I can...This reads very much like a murder ballad... I can almost hear Nick Cave singing.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-12891453599864515672017-11-19T16:52:30.186+00:002017-11-19T16:52:30.186+00:00Reality is a door few willingly walk through,
Eli...Reality is a door few willingly walk through,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-15407697357298387792017-11-19T14:10:53.566+00:002017-11-19T14:10:53.566+00:00I really like the rhyme and repetition....moves th...I really like the rhyme and repetition....moves the story along so well. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-22255971664452807392017-11-19T13:25:45.036+00:002017-11-19T13:25:45.036+00:00Wow! So Poe like, specially the end!! But the main...Wow! So Poe like, specially the end!! But the main thread is a piercing sadness.Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-17623596989524606952017-11-19T13:10:19.408+00:002017-11-19T13:10:19.408+00:00Yikes. The refrain is rather haunting Anna. As is ...Yikes. The refrain is rather haunting Anna. As is the story you weave throughout. Really heartbreaking in its reality. What hides behind the doors, and in the bottle, and those that are caught in the aftermath.<br /><br />Very well written Anna.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-30691836195659451892017-11-19T13:00:22.295+00:002017-11-19T13:00:22.295+00:00I wonder if the ghost of your dead central heating...I wonder if the ghost of your dead central heating was muse to this piece ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-708367610922592932017-11-19T12:39:07.196+00:002017-11-19T12:39:07.196+00:00Powerful visual of the horror....Powerful visual of the horror....Thotpurgenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-46311855824100506642017-11-19T11:40:50.317+00:002017-11-19T11:40:50.317+00:00A feast of hungry ghosts here in royal rhyme. This...A feast of hungry ghosts here in royal rhyme. This shrieks in faintest details -- the only leavings of ghosts -- which are doors which truly may best keep padlocked. Or so to open, to let the sins be known ... Terrifying stuff.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-35522665555085213372017-11-19T11:26:25.824+00:002017-11-19T11:26:25.824+00:00Wow, what a stunning piece of writing, so powerful...Wow, what a stunning piece of writing, so powerful. A truly masterful write. Thanks for sharing it with us.John Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00020697451985437188noreply@blogger.com