tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post2553140699709810478..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: FearhyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-43959923395684934372018-01-18T22:29:34.229+00:002018-01-18T22:29:34.229+00:00This is brilliant Anna! Love the form! This gave m...This is brilliant Anna! Love the form! This gave me chills....i love it!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-9142852828777489902018-01-17T10:43:14.899+00:002018-01-17T10:43:14.899+00:00Very clever. Very clever. aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-42647634759250996952018-01-16T23:11:05.960+00:002018-01-16T23:11:05.960+00:00This is brilliant! A chain rhyme done to a 55 wor...This is brilliant! A chain rhyme done to a 55 word count - AND you have totally nailed the content, to boot ... a really clever - albeit eerie and visceral - expression of fear. I am so impressed with this piece. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-38186924524197101632018-01-16T22:35:15.656+00:002018-01-16T22:35:15.656+00:00What a subtle effect! One can not notice the rhyme...What a subtle effect! One can not notice the rhymes/think of them as rhymes as you read - but feel the distinctive effect they have on the poem.<br /><br />It reminded me of that engraving, The Nightmare.<br /><br />https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/d/d5/Thomas_Burke_The_Nightmare_engraving.jpg/330px-Thomas_Burke_The_Nightmare_engraving.jpgAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-55132688766852082202018-01-16T12:35:40.344+00:002018-01-16T12:35:40.344+00:00very well executed with the form. and yes, utterly...very well executed with the form. and yes, utterly chilling at the same time.dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-7264255565249662952018-01-16T06:57:24.195+00:002018-01-16T06:57:24.195+00:00spooky!spooky!MNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-4896124551779476072018-01-15T23:56:35.675+00:002018-01-15T23:56:35.675+00:00Ooh, that is utterly sinister and chilling – the e...Ooh, that is utterly sinister and chilling – the epitome of fear.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-23933883920124699142018-01-15T19:47:50.442+00:002018-01-15T19:47:50.442+00:00An admirable personification of fear. Tight rhythm...An admirable personification of fear. Tight rhythm and pacing--brilliant write!Frank J. Tassonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034177573832896440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-55246961097593755142018-01-15T15:17:09.277+00:002018-01-15T15:17:09.277+00:00Great job here.Great job here.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-15537232205579835732018-01-15T11:51:54.208+00:002018-01-15T11:51:54.208+00:00Monday WRites 138 is live, Please link in.
Much l...<a href="http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2018/01/monday-writes-138.html" rel="nofollow"> Monday WRites 138</a> is live, Please link in.<br /><br />Much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-64482353390124967482018-01-15T11:51:42.596+00:002018-01-15T11:51:42.596+00:00Great word craft!!! a bit 'spine tingly'
...Great word craft!!! a bit 'spine tingly'<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-16936517311323481622018-01-15T11:30:55.167+00:002018-01-15T11:30:55.167+00:00This is absolutely phenomenal, Anna!!💞This is absolutely phenomenal, Anna!!💞Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-5654264349433445872018-01-15T10:48:04.797+00:002018-01-15T10:48:04.797+00:00Stunning. Loved what you had to say even more!Stunning. Loved what you had to say even more!Samyuktha Semi Jayaprakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879275723002707278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-83915343686739829612018-01-15T08:00:43.172+00:002018-01-15T08:00:43.172+00:00excellentexcellentmud greenhttps://mudgreen.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-12163348874435045632018-01-15T05:35:31.629+00:002018-01-15T05:35:31.629+00:00I love the chilling undertone here very effective ...I love the chilling undertone here very effective Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-22479679767289873642018-01-15T01:28:40.934+00:002018-01-15T01:28:40.934+00:00Wow chain style AND 55 words, you outdid yourself....Wow chain style AND 55 words, you outdid yourself. Bravo.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70108269303634034802018-01-15T01:11:28.291+00:002018-01-15T01:11:28.291+00:00This is outstanding! Scary photo, scary words. L...This is outstanding! Scary photo, scary words. Love it.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-77162758073349914152018-01-15T00:20:40.580+00:002018-01-15T00:20:40.580+00:00I really liked the way you worked the chain rhyme....I really liked the way you worked the chain rhyme. A really REALLY chilling portrayal!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-31767611563116008532018-01-14T22:16:46.535+00:002018-01-14T22:16:46.535+00:00Superbly executed and very sinister.Superbly executed and very sinister.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-21179713598284710622018-01-14T22:10:21.025+00:002018-01-14T22:10:21.025+00:00Bravo! It was surely no easy task ...Bravo! It was surely no easy task ...Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-9814310311764751142018-01-14T22:08:38.299+00:002018-01-14T22:08:38.299+00:00
A masterful example of chain rhyme, nevermind it ...<br />A masterful example of chain rhyme, nevermind it gives me chills! I will sleep tonight with one eye open. lolindybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-29656396734423505222018-01-14T21:36:25.239+00:002018-01-14T21:36:25.239+00:00This is def on the creepy side, but written so wel...This is def on the creepy side, but written so well!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-38189191915758099622018-01-14T21:33:22.222+00:002018-01-14T21:33:22.222+00:00You sure know how to craft creepy that creeps thro...You sure know how to craft creepy that creeps through the edges, my lady. I can definitely feel the tingle... Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-4818762355926620142018-01-14T20:58:31.064+00:002018-01-14T20:58:31.064+00:00Oooh, very eerie! Oooh, very eerie! Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-15804120369407772502018-01-14T20:24:44.252+00:002018-01-14T20:24:44.252+00:00This is a wow for me--so well done!!This is a wow for me--so well done!!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.com