tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post4781471365401723491..comments2024-03-27T13:48:27.538+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: BirdsonghyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-85364093467675642732014-05-23T22:52:40.209+01:002014-05-23T22:52:40.209+01:00Another cracker, Anna!Another cracker, Anna!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70229408888381069052014-05-17T15:57:27.152+01:002014-05-17T15:57:27.152+01:00"I shall not sleep in dreams of darkest night..."I shall not sleep in dreams of darkest night<br />nor shall I hide in guard of folded wing,<br />instead I shall succumb to endless flight<br />as high above this earth I soar and sing" - a beautiful poem. Loved it :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-67138674699112782382014-05-13T19:55:28.368+01:002014-05-13T19:55:28.368+01:00I love this, it's amazing! I love how it's...I love this, it's amazing! I love how it's written out of the point of view of birds. And it sounds wonderful to me! Beatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14712395242968990000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-72705792875387309292014-05-09T16:59:31.916+01:002014-05-09T16:59:31.916+01:00tight and beautiful!tight and beautiful!Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-20359822467727306632014-05-05T08:30:02.131+01:002014-05-05T08:30:02.131+01:00paeon?
paean more like :-)
And it is too!
Well d...paeon?<br /><br />paean more like :-)<br /><br />And it is too!<br />Well done you, out of your comfort zone.jo-hannahttp://vertical-dash.blogspot.co.uk/2014/04/lemonade.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-10208601364975820282014-05-05T06:29:00.489+01:002014-05-05T06:29:00.489+01:00Loved this poem! Positive and bright! Loved this poem! Positive and bright! Aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881690136782545422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-63761988209327104772014-05-04T11:08:28.409+01:002014-05-04T11:08:28.409+01:00Beautiful poem. I thought you were maybe quoting a...Beautiful poem. I thought you were maybe quoting a renowned poet until I read you had written it yourself!<br /><br />The Word problem does indeed sound like you have accidentally nudged the INSERT or INS button. When pressed once (as accidentally in your case)it gobbles up letters. When pressed again it cancels that and you are back to normal again. ope that helps for the future.ADDYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01018958238940897902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-50045740474356065052014-05-04T07:21:06.203+01:002014-05-04T07:21:06.203+01:00I enjoyed this.I enjoyed this.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-73142196329666808732014-05-04T06:17:00.081+01:002014-05-04T06:17:00.081+01:00Very nice sonnet. I love your closing coupletVery nice sonnet. I love your closing coupletAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-49443399188193348522014-05-03T19:43:40.890+01:002014-05-03T19:43:40.890+01:00... waiting for birdsong ... stop ... winter came ...... waiting for birdsong ... stop ... winter came back this week end ... stop ... telegram of love to hate this asap ... stop ... oh ...^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-14591716756238993072014-05-03T16:57:34.619+01:002014-05-03T16:57:34.619+01:00Nice.......very uplifting...sometimes, though, I r...Nice.......very uplifting...sometimes, though, I really have to talk to myself about this..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-38930961095271588072014-05-03T16:52:15.301+01:002014-05-03T16:52:15.301+01:00ah yes - embracing the wondrous gift of life - tha...ah yes - embracing the wondrous gift of life - that sounds like the right thing to do... love the song in your verse... beautifully uplifting indeedClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-24130850355646648122014-05-03T13:02:03.654+01:002014-05-03T13:02:03.654+01:00I love this. Reminds me of the circle of life in m...I love this. Reminds me of the circle of life in many ways. Birth and death. Morning and Night. Beginning and End. I love it...the beautiful circle of life :) very apropos for spring. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-36374509829273825092014-05-03T11:02:03.409+01:002014-05-03T11:02:03.409+01:00You have done very well Anna, It is a harder form ...You have done very well Anna, It is a harder form than you realise but I think you have written a fine sonnet. It flows nicely and you subject was easy to follow. So well done.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-14580146615946888502014-05-03T10:24:24.341+01:002014-05-03T10:24:24.341+01:00Superb pleasure! I figure how difficult the writin...Superb pleasure! I figure how difficult the writing must have been - but it reads itself with ease.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-69228108745725663132014-05-03T09:16:04.467+01:002014-05-03T09:16:04.467+01:00Hi Anna,
You've given us an uplifing paeon to...Hi Anna,<br /><br />You've given us an uplifing paeon to the wonder and joys of life, and a challenge to make the most of the time that we have.<br /><br />Writing sonnets is hard, especially for dedicated free-verse poets ... smiles.<br /><br />There are a few places where I would have made different word choices to yours, but I think that's part of what makes each poet's voice distinctive.<br /><br />I also understand your concerns about the closing couplet - although i think the trouble starts in the line before. I'm not sure what I'd do about it; probably take my own sonnet's advice and procrastinate for a bit ... smiles<br /><br />And your Word problem is as Brian says; hit the Insert button on your keyboard again and it should be resolved.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-42862957392055540742014-05-03T07:12:26.089+01:002014-05-03T07:12:26.089+01:00Oh I really love this.. It's like a morning in...Oh I really love this.. It's like a morning in spring.. So sweet and classic feel to it.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-78033265227350900082014-05-03T06:56:29.746+01:002014-05-03T06:56:29.746+01:00Time and again we need to remind ourselves of the ...Time and again we need to remind ourselves of the treasures of life and nature. Thanks for the reminder:)!!!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-52095387719274034602014-05-03T05:09:19.570+01:002014-05-03T05:09:19.570+01:00Your poem is a lovely affirmation. So read it, I r...Your poem is a lovely affirmation. So read it, I realized it is exactly what I needed tonight before going to sleep. I hope it means that things are good with you and yours. Later, dear, sweet Anna and great big hugs!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-67398710489118803762014-05-03T03:54:43.571+01:002014-05-03T03:54:43.571+01:00Inhaling the earth is a very fine way to embrace i...Inhaling the earth is a very fine way to embrace it. Flying birds, bats and butterflies seem to me to be the guardians. Love this poem!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-40522976970904255272014-05-03T03:19:17.765+01:002014-05-03T03:19:17.765+01:00"and new life springs upon my wondrous death&..."and new life springs upon my wondrous death"...love this line...<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-37314073145891207812014-05-03T01:24:56.506+01:002014-05-03T01:24:56.506+01:00I specially like this part:
as high above this ea...I specially like this part:<br /><br />as high above this earth I soar and sing <br /><br />Loving the positive energy flowing from your words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-22635735380354254582014-05-03T00:05:14.979+01:002014-05-03T00:05:14.979+01:00yes, you have hit the insert button...that is what...yes, you have hit the insert button...that is what is gobbling up your words....smiles...<br /><br />and you verse is quite uplifting....its quite a legacy of joyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com