tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post7189961971470464832..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: TumourhyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-202453808897436132017-10-06T18:51:47.965+01:002017-10-06T18:51:47.965+01:00I'm not really sure I understand all of this, ...I'm not really sure I understand all of this, but you've got me thinking about the way our brains respond to stimuli such as sound – and getting the reader thinking must be a good result.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-36087574580249923582017-10-06T18:28:19.249+01:002017-10-06T18:28:19.249+01:00I enjoyed your take!I enjoyed your take!Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-47512160507307724092017-10-03T12:27:39.001+01:002017-10-03T12:27:39.001+01:00Very interesting read
much love...Very interesting read<br /><br /> much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-86723369468250562002017-10-03T03:07:13.166+01:002017-10-03T03:07:13.166+01:00horses not zebras.. what a fascinating line of tho...horses not zebras.. what a fascinating line of thought. Intriguing. Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-36755612817434055772017-10-02T02:37:08.881+01:002017-10-02T02:37:08.881+01:00An intriguing 'take' on the prompt of '...An intriguing 'take' on the prompt of 'chaos' - more so for its basis in reality. <br /> Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-89276077232188908692017-10-01T23:34:06.114+01:002017-10-01T23:34:06.114+01:00What an interestingly crafted poem...layers using ...What an interestingly crafted poem...layers using a wonderful quote!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-84478951572544081782017-10-01T21:08:10.846+01:002017-10-01T21:08:10.846+01:00This was intriguing. Blessed day my friend!This was intriguing. Blessed day my friend!Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-84491013573211383632017-10-01T20:31:29.453+01:002017-10-01T20:31:29.453+01:00Had to re-read and found it profound...
ZQHad to re-read and found it profound...<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-27430500397671727182017-10-01T20:19:40.219+01:002017-10-01T20:19:40.219+01:00Always good when 'the mind still has it.' ...Always good when 'the mind still has it.' Then there is hope.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-6045720185250209522017-10-01T19:53:53.798+01:002017-10-01T19:53:53.798+01:00I really enjoyed it, although it was disconcerting...I really enjoyed it, although it was disconcerting. It was fractured and felt like how fractured things are when they are unexpected and cannot be put back together.Alison Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08215158863724691355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-15179688009408913562017-10-01T19:52:22.078+01:002017-10-01T19:52:22.078+01:00I think the zebras are always hiding behind the ho...I think the zebras are always hiding behind the horses, snickering. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-75233506529894509452017-10-01T19:12:07.513+01:002017-10-01T19:12:07.513+01:00Beautifully done. I've been a zebra for years...Beautifully done. I've been a zebra for years; it's not at all pleasant.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-983917295968099492017-10-01T17:14:07.496+01:002017-10-01T17:14:07.496+01:00
Somehow chaotic and unsettling to read ... but I ...<br />Somehow chaotic and unsettling to read ... but I LIKE zebras! indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-89343770523474495362017-10-01T17:10:14.805+01:002017-10-01T17:10:14.805+01:00A broken mirror of a poem. Hard to stare into beca...A broken mirror of a poem. Hard to stare into because of the truth evident. Magnificent writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-89209221075648542882017-10-01T16:49:21.374+01:002017-10-01T16:49:21.374+01:00This is so beautifully haunting..!This is so beautifully haunting..!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-18313478990433250012017-10-01T10:04:56.297+01:002017-10-01T10:04:56.297+01:00Zebras and chaos theory - what a wonderful combina...Zebras and chaos theory - what a wonderful combination, Anna!I love the way the poem starts with 'Oddly' and the lines:<br />'But why, as<br />*“When you hear hoof beats, think of horses not zebras.” <br />So horses it is as the zebra runs wild.'<br />This is so poignant and heartbreaking:<br />'Eddy is dead now, yet I still live (unaware of the chaos to come.)'<br />I know that feeling.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-48331843514900356782017-10-01T06:38:50.956+01:002017-10-01T06:38:50.956+01:00What a great quote to use - the title giving us th...What a great quote to use - the title giving us the answer, the word you cannot really say, the cause of cancer is like butterfly, the advent of storm, love the way you layered the text,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-15726090221786928882017-10-01T04:49:35.537+01:002017-10-01T04:49:35.537+01:00I can relate to these rather fractured thoughts, H...I can relate to these rather fractured thoughts, HyperCRYTICAL ... Number 1.) ... When learning stick shift driving and my best friend telling me to JUST PASS, GIRL, DAMNIT, JUST PASS THIS DAMN CAR ... Number 2.) Same friend telling me: SLOW DOWN NOW, GIRL OR U WANT YOUR GODDAMN GRAVE STONE TO READ: BUT SHE WAS RIGHT? ... Any which way, awesome read, maybe new friend ... Love, cat.^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-56258382885445700862017-10-01T03:15:24.089+01:002017-10-01T03:15:24.089+01:00This is a very interesting poem, with the horses a...This is a very interesting poem, with the horses and zebras and the interspersed dialogue. Quite wonderful to read, Anna.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-30369599880224417052017-10-01T02:28:12.133+01:002017-10-01T02:28:12.133+01:00I am struck by the fractured thoughts one has with...I am struck by the fractured thoughts one has with this sort of event. You created that fracture, that chaos perfectly.Sarah Russellhttp://www.sarahrussellpoetry.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-7536974304624478022017-10-01T00:24:59.505+01:002017-10-01T00:24:59.505+01:00Butterflies and chaos here ... and dark clouds. Th...Butterflies and chaos here ... and dark clouds. This reader found the way in difficult & fraught. Stay with it.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.com