tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post7485277338524318362..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: Wash DayhyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-27359220670486739312017-05-06T17:42:49.104+01:002017-05-06T17:42:49.104+01:00I so love how you had me thinking one way in the b...I so love how you had me thinking one way in the beginning of your poem and then totally different with the twist in the end. Yes, leave him blowing in the wind.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-12338116792719077682017-05-06T04:04:26.543+01:002017-05-06T04:04:26.543+01:00Wow, that was unexpected. I can feel her satisfact...Wow, that was unexpected. I can feel her satisfaction as she leaves him blowing in the wind!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-7573572947980953212017-05-06T00:52:56.202+01:002017-05-06T00:52:56.202+01:00but cleansed her soul she pegs him out,
leaves him...but cleansed her soul she pegs him out,<br />leaves him blowing in the wind.<br /><br />Some unwanted elements deserve what they get. Great write Anna!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-62450790429882253302017-05-05T18:36:52.895+01:002017-05-05T18:36:52.895+01:00Wow....heavy, beautiful, evocative of such darknes...Wow....heavy, beautiful, evocative of such darkness...and tension. Great poem!<br /><br />Jane (Lady Nyo)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-1102896382359852152017-05-05T17:15:28.786+01:002017-05-05T17:15:28.786+01:00Oh, outstanding!Oh, outstanding!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-69170527306633357952017-05-05T14:48:20.798+01:002017-05-05T14:48:20.798+01:00A peek into her shadowed soul. Painful in its beau...A peek into her shadowed soul. Painful in its beauty. Beautiful in its pain! Nicely penned, Anna!Walt Wojtanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02649275109990415030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-31616394953324885182017-05-05T14:45:07.801+01:002017-05-05T14:45:07.801+01:00This is most excellently dark... love it, and coul...This is most excellently dark... love it, and could also feel that it fitted the Tuesday prompt... somehow I didn't expect that knife coming up.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-4263361587092161392017-05-05T14:09:02.927+01:002017-05-05T14:09:02.927+01:00Sometimes we do what we have to do. Where I could...Sometimes we do what we have to do. Where I could from it is said, we only kill those that need killin'. And there you have it. annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-43002840862571816212017-05-05T04:27:29.518+01:002017-05-05T04:27:29.518+01:00
Dark, but beautifully written. A story within it...<br />Dark, but beautifully written. A story within its lines.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-25887979362462789012017-05-05T03:31:17.045+01:002017-05-05T03:31:17.045+01:00There's something stealthily humorous about th...There's something stealthily humorous about this work of art. And I like the title too.Nan Mykelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02443309674986975824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-7344721602579190882017-05-05T03:11:40.250+01:002017-05-05T03:11:40.250+01:00Oh my... that was a dark ending...nice twist. Oh my... that was a dark ending...nice twist. Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-79075548902641631392017-05-05T01:44:37.227+01:002017-05-05T01:44:37.227+01:00Darkly sad of how pain leads to pain leads to pain...Darkly sad of how pain leads to pain leads to pain and ...<br />But then, maybe I misunderstood.Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-51161453387205965782017-05-05T01:41:38.857+01:002017-05-05T01:41:38.857+01:00What a great twist! ...the ending leaves just enou...What a great twist! ...the ending leaves just enough to the imagination to be truly murderous. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-7253195732650637902017-05-05T00:26:14.283+01:002017-05-05T00:26:14.283+01:00This is a wild evil story Anna ~ Love that twist ...This is a wild evil story Anna ~ Love that twist in the end ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-42486744451574407462017-05-04T23:57:36.314+01:002017-05-04T23:57:36.314+01:00Now that is a twist! Very cleverly crafted. I fi...Now that is a twist! Very cleverly crafted. I find myself humming along with her as she "pegs him out, leaves him blowing in the wind"Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-84425659324065854172017-05-04T23:29:05.376+01:002017-05-04T23:29:05.376+01:00Way beyond a catharsis--this lady cut out the pain...Way beyond a catharsis--this lady cut out the pain foisted on her--yet as a murderer, we still find time to overlook the morality and break into a chorus of he done her wrong-& got what he deserved; very clever layering indeed.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-72228225950080730242017-05-04T23:03:37.065+01:002017-05-04T23:03:37.065+01:00I'm thinking there are many, many ladies wanti...I'm thinking there are many, many ladies wanting to be able to do this. Now.yours has her chance and she won't ever stop doing this enoyable act of retribution. She should seek help though, this is consuming her. <br />Nice, nicely written with a clever surprise ending. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-9507924753068156432017-05-04T20:06:53.012+01:002017-05-04T20:06:53.012+01:00I enjoyed this wonderful description of what seems...I enjoyed this wonderful description of what seems to be an act of intimacy and love, Anna, but twists at the end, like the knife. I love the way the poem turns on the line 'there is wire in her blood' and the rhyme in the next stanza makes it all the more murderous:<br />'Her breath caught in deep excitement,<br />she scrubs away his scent,<br />from deep within and deep without he <br />the source of malcontent'.<br />But those last two lines leave the reader wondering - it seems she still has some tenderness for him:<br />'but cleansed her soul she pegs him out,<br />leaves him blowing in the wind.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-83384754463852378072017-05-04T19:18:42.810+01:002017-05-04T19:18:42.810+01:00Luv the fact that this bit of writing is layered
...Luv the fact that this bit of writing is layered<br /><br />Much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-12379510836360770652017-05-04T18:26:52.616+01:002017-05-04T18:26:52.616+01:00A literal twist in the narrative. Loved the beauti...A literal twist in the narrative. Loved the beautiful metaphors used to describe an ugly, but often necessary act of humanity. <br /><br />She seemed to love his scent almost as much as she had grown to loath it. <br /><br />Sharp writing.The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-40175960949386730602017-05-04T18:07:59.477+01:002017-05-04T18:07:59.477+01:00Like Debi, I was caught buy surprise at the ending...Like Debi, I was caught buy surprise at the ending.ADDYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01018958238940897902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-31524719954020980432017-05-04T16:31:35.863+01:002017-05-04T16:31:35.863+01:00This is fantastic Anna. Really pulls the reader in...This is fantastic Anna. Really pulls the reader in and for me the sense that there ws something else in here was palpable before the reveal. Well crafted indeed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-73410283971478806762017-05-04T15:49:31.088+01:002017-05-04T15:49:31.088+01:00Not where I was expecting this to go... great stor...Not where I was expecting this to go... great story writing.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70483008155790176992017-05-04T15:47:38.776+01:002017-05-04T15:47:38.776+01:00My goodness this is good!!My goodness this is good!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-85254250163548021602017-05-04T13:41:37.131+01:002017-05-04T13:41:37.131+01:00oh...evocative... and sounds like cleansing for a ...oh...evocative... and sounds like cleansing for a new start!Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.com