tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post7720320386865640843..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: Sleep of DeathhyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-60622282987278540122012-07-19T21:27:54.953+01:002012-07-19T21:27:54.953+01:00"Was my love but to amuse?" So sad, the..."Was my love but to amuse?" So sad, the tale of Ophelia. As Noel Coward said, "But I believe/that since my life began/the most I've had is just/a talent to amuse... Heigh ho, if love were all."<br /><br />The feel of this poem, masterful and classic. Intentional, yet wistful. Quite the feat! AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-18482522205987037442012-07-15T02:08:31.126+01:002012-07-15T02:08:31.126+01:00Powerful piece full of emotion!Powerful piece full of emotion!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-3592807823656872932012-07-11T15:42:31.937+01:002012-07-11T15:42:31.937+01:00Thanks so much for your welcome comments folks.
A...Thanks so much for your welcome comments folks.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-41038133851541352242012-07-10T18:31:45.716+01:002012-07-10T18:31:45.716+01:00Beautiful. Simply amazing. The words you used move...Beautiful. Simply amazing. The words you used moved mountains. Thanks for sharing.truck loanshttp://ffundingaus.livejournal.com/3309.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-4987481671174436692012-07-10T12:30:58.467+01:002012-07-10T12:30:58.467+01:00Your poem reminds me that it's all about persp...Your poem reminds me that it's all about perspective. What to one person is just a side show, to another is the main attraction. <br />Thanks - I feel like that's important. And, this is beautifully written. 'Oh willow...'Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-19033978521272489042012-07-09T00:35:13.449+01:002012-07-09T00:35:13.449+01:00Very Elizabethan and oh! the cruelty of love! Well...Very Elizabethan and oh! the cruelty of love! Well-penned, sister. When you gonna come and post some more poetry on our board? Love your gritty stuffLuke Praterhttp://lukepraterswordsalad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-91814532565552371442012-07-08T20:24:59.244+01:002012-07-08T20:24:59.244+01:00What an elegant and rhythmical poem. I really like...What an elegant and rhythmical poem. I really liked this take on Ophelia, not to mention many other folk stories of unrequited love.Jenny Woolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881781466502273314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-301265729209369952012-07-08T16:37:22.147+01:002012-07-08T16:37:22.147+01:00Thank you Anna. This is lovely - and moving. Yours...Thank you Anna. This is lovely - and moving. Yours is another blog that I must pay more regular attention to.Dr Henry Tegnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09066781800926576413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-11680305436131937062012-07-08T15:33:29.464+01:002012-07-08T15:33:29.464+01:00Fascinating, deep imagery in this poem. I like the...Fascinating, deep imagery in this poem. I like the way you use the classic writing. It gives depth to the poem.dental centre new farmhttp://myenvisageonline.blog.com/2012/03/14/how-the-dentist-in-new-farm-could-help-lengthen-your-life/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-72303025849937991812012-07-06T09:56:19.742+01:002012-07-06T09:56:19.742+01:00Well crafted, like the haunted pensive mood.Well crafted, like the haunted pensive mood.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-25819276995183531812012-07-05T16:15:44.263+01:002012-07-05T16:15:44.263+01:00The vibrations of love cannot be ignored. Great ve...The vibrations of love cannot be ignored. Great verse Anna!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-40223666938497776832012-07-05T14:34:43.676+01:002012-07-05T14:34:43.676+01:00You can feel the essence of Ophelia intertwining t...You can feel the essence of Ophelia intertwining through the lines. Touching.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-67356785197438678852012-07-05T10:30:54.344+01:002012-07-05T10:30:54.344+01:00Lovely. and love your font too, goes perfect with ...Lovely. and love your font too, goes perfect with the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-19672721672236793662012-07-05T09:53:06.964+01:002012-07-05T09:53:06.964+01:00I imagine, this would be even more tragic for an e...I imagine, this would be even more tragic for an elf. Lovely, Anne.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-11291174689236913962012-07-05T03:41:34.358+01:002012-07-05T03:41:34.358+01:00so very very sad...well captured.so very very sad...well captured.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-68791978531354194802012-07-05T01:05:38.051+01:002012-07-05T01:05:38.051+01:00Lovely old-time language in this tragic piece.Lovely old-time language in this tragic piece.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-47567310417790596042012-07-04T23:19:01.318+01:002012-07-04T23:19:01.318+01:00Awww...it is such a sad story, isn't it. I agr...Awww...it is such a sad story, isn't it. I agree with Brian, it has a nice classical feel about the language you've used which helps to make it even more evocative.<br />Lovely read :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-36276716181951331652012-07-04T23:18:41.060+01:002012-07-04T23:18:41.060+01:00Thank you for your kind comments folks.
Anna :o]Thank you for your kind comments folks.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-39916629350402829172012-07-03T21:21:04.498+01:002012-07-03T21:21:04.498+01:00BRAVO! Bravo!BRAVO! Bravo!Donna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-64877567536850751622012-07-03T20:21:17.028+01:002012-07-03T20:21:17.028+01:00I can really feel her despair here - poor Ophelia....I can really feel her despair here - poor Ophelia.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-42062347261923468232012-07-03T10:01:35.020+01:002012-07-03T10:01:35.020+01:00Very emotional...nicely written...Very emotional...nicely written...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-71602540024767328392012-07-03T05:05:42.963+01:002012-07-03T05:05:42.963+01:00so emotional and full of wonderful language
<a...so emotional and full of wonderful language<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/02/where-are-the-koi/>where are the koi</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-5415881587413554892012-07-02T22:17:31.915+01:002012-07-02T22:17:31.915+01:00This really works. I liked it!
=)This really works. I liked it!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-23055106098118480142012-07-02T15:57:57.479+01:002012-07-02T15:57:57.479+01:00I like the word play in the last two lines - captu...I like the word play in the last two lines - captures the olde worlde feel of this poem...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-2824202637464679962012-07-02T15:24:46.867+01:002012-07-02T15:24:46.867+01:00Powerful word portrait of Ophelia.Powerful word portrait of Ophelia.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.com