tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post8313803664945472524..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: ThinghyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70993405220338358212014-04-02T22:24:59.814+01:002014-04-02T22:24:59.814+01:00How on earth did I miss this one? Your musings are...How on earth did I miss this one? Your musings are rather dark, touching on themes that I also enjoy exploring. Really good write. I enjoyed reading it! The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-23049481156151249132014-02-16T21:29:47.923+00:002014-02-16T21:29:47.923+00:00Liked the way you extended the rhyme words. assu/w...Liked the way you extended the rhyme words. assu/wage was creative too.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-6717614963017105182014-02-15T21:05:11.024+00:002014-02-15T21:05:11.024+00:00I find this very mysterious, and don't know wh...I find this very mysterious, and don't know what it means - but it is very powerful. Jenny Woolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16881781466502273314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-25598896562655941542014-02-15T20:18:46.573+00:002014-02-15T20:18:46.573+00:00Black magic is shining through but I am sure you u...Black magic is shining through but I am sure you used skill and not the former to make your peace so tragical-magical.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-42185918292340534752014-02-15T18:32:39.292+00:002014-02-15T18:32:39.292+00:00you have weaved quite a spell here. I feel like t...you have weaved quite a spell here. I feel like there is something hidden here beneath the surface. really nicely done.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-86992618667614801422014-02-14T22:57:48.406+00:002014-02-14T22:57:48.406+00:00I love "asswage" and all the other ways ...I love "asswage" and all the other ways you adapted the words to suit the tone of this poem. So clever. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-9918641989825682702014-02-14T19:54:24.547+00:002014-02-14T19:54:24.547+00:00Quite a story - forsaking all for love, and then d...Quite a story - forsaking all for love, and then denied..tragedy impending! Well played. Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-77818479861049456042014-02-14T19:39:58.257+00:002014-02-14T19:39:58.257+00:00... and that's how the cookie crumbles ...... and that's how the cookie crumbles ... ^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-64537216256568004412014-02-14T18:57:05.289+00:002014-02-14T18:57:05.289+00:00Whoop! Her desire, despite of her fear is a strong...Whoop! Her desire, despite of her fear is a strong narrative of lust dominating over her senses. <br />And his denial... that was that really.<br />I like the story you came up with and the rhymes are cleverly done. Nicely penned.HAhttp://howanxious.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-79623228531101268162014-02-14T18:12:37.118+00:002014-02-14T18:12:37.118+00:00Oh I love bringing back words from the burial grou...Oh I love bringing back words from the burial grounds.. partly it's a poets duty to make sure that words survive.. a great and surprisingly sad end....brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-84395857856463129712014-02-14T17:33:14.467+00:002014-02-14T17:33:14.467+00:00Asswage added to our vocabulary, thanks; kind of l...Asswage added to our vocabulary, thanks; kind of like the girl who broke her glasses because she thought they were asspecs; you were wonderful with the unbridled rough-housing of the words, and the classic form rocks too; good job!Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-56796259710162569922014-02-14T13:38:04.849+00:002014-02-14T13:38:04.849+00:00Ouch, great use of the words. Ouch, great use of the words. Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-8614643272806879352014-02-14T13:13:06.861+00:002014-02-14T13:13:06.861+00:00What a sad story. Well toldWhat a sad story. Well toldAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-55473273456833866352014-02-14T12:56:31.296+00:002014-02-14T12:56:31.296+00:00Wow this was fantastic...the depths that we go to ...Wow this was fantastic...the depths that we go to for our longing for love. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-69394036914003614012014-02-14T10:42:20.682+00:002014-02-14T10:42:20.682+00:00Sharing and wanting to be loved is every one's...Sharing and wanting to be loved is every one's right. If only she'll get it eventually. Nicely Anna!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-76957784183697251542014-02-14T09:17:31.413+00:002014-02-14T09:17:31.413+00:00I love your creative use of the end-rhymes/additio...I love your creative use of the end-rhymes/additional syllables.<br />But yes, sad story of desperation - hope to never become like that...Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-51036216651996448202014-02-14T08:35:10.247+00:002014-02-14T08:35:10.247+00:00Really well played, Anna. You've really shown ...Really well played, Anna. You've really shown what can be done to adapt the rhymes to your poem's needs in this clever tale of lust and disappointment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-48851805686507666272014-02-14T05:06:40.617+00:002014-02-14T05:06:40.617+00:00asswage ... a cool word.. didn't hear it befor...asswage ... a cool word.. didn't hear it before...and ugh what a sad story... i do hope she finds someone that wants to share bed and life with herClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-69585276958120415332014-02-14T03:38:47.212+00:002014-02-14T03:38:47.212+00:00fiend indeed ~ fiend indeed ~ Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-37950498959422735512014-02-14T02:59:32.902+00:002014-02-14T02:59:32.902+00:00Ha...like it ...unchurch...ans asswage are great!Ha...like it ...unchurch...ans asswage are great!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-74075174820109784062014-02-14T02:53:33.357+00:002014-02-14T02:53:33.357+00:00oops ..syncoops ..syncCressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-33673884504253281352014-02-14T02:53:07.015+00:002014-02-14T02:53:07.015+00:00Ha ha ha... asswage ( love it)...great example of ...Ha ha ha... asswage ( love it)...great example of poetic license..our minds were in sunc on this one...enjoyed!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-39202553980795488972014-02-14T02:27:09.852+00:002014-02-14T02:27:09.852+00:00so many talented writers here - I'm with Brian...so many talented writers here - I'm with Brian on the way you modified the words, my head was spinning I couldn't begin to think of doing that, nicely penned Anna. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-13943511095343678402014-02-14T01:19:51.250+00:002014-02-14T01:19:51.250+00:00What a sad story; often too true.Hunger for compan...What a sad story; often too true.Hunger for companionship can take us over a cliff. <br /><br />On this Valentine Day, I wish everyone great companions. But, most of all, I wish them contentment and acceptance of what life has dealt them. We may plan and concoct, but love is not easily caught.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-76672034351093328172014-02-14T00:32:46.195+00:002014-02-14T00:32:46.195+00:00wow...desperation for sure...unwilling to have an ...wow...desperation for sure...unwilling to have an empty bed she will try anything...and he an unwilling suitor....really cool on the words you came up to modify the rhyme words....very cool...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com