tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post8959973580227699181..comments2024-03-29T00:31:51.931+00:00Comments on HyperCRYPTICal: FallhyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-59903682205377293422015-10-14T16:54:31.225+01:002015-10-14T16:54:31.225+01:00How much means fall, how much means spring? It all...How much means fall, how much means spring? It all depends on light we see or cannot see. Well woven piece : )Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-65960702970510856322015-10-12T19:15:59.695+01:002015-10-12T19:15:59.695+01:00lovely images.. lovely images.. Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-45310581711136164072015-10-06T13:16:37.197+01:002015-10-06T13:16:37.197+01:00A marvelous piece, with sad tones. A marvelous piece, with sad tones. Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-50366383101090567002015-10-02T23:12:04.629+01:002015-10-02T23:12:04.629+01:00Wow, that took an unexpected turn. A compelling an...Wow, that took an unexpected turn. A compelling and entertaining read, thanks MoskBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-25724754747331841352015-10-02T19:29:20.024+01:002015-10-02T19:29:20.024+01:00The beginning of your poem starts out with such a ...The beginning of your poem starts out with such a "routine" observation of nature and gives no sense of what is about to come but that "remnant of a long lost summer" line ties the two together perfectly...and tragically. A powerful punch at the end...it surprised me.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-6278201615787932742015-10-02T13:41:34.034+01:002015-10-02T13:41:34.034+01:00Do we fall or do we jump..is there a difference......Do we fall or do we jump..is there a difference...i wish she had looked out the window before heading to the bathroom..she may not have seen a frog but another light that said try another minute, another hour, another dayJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-53273521876667620942015-10-02T11:41:44.349+01:002015-10-02T11:41:44.349+01:00Tragic ending. Good piece.Tragic ending. Good piece.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-847429672690669982015-10-02T05:31:54.396+01:002015-10-02T05:31:54.396+01:00This took me by surprise...sad, but so effective.This took me by surprise...sad, but so effective.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-68303095421652479562015-10-02T03:57:02.344+01:002015-10-02T03:57:02.344+01:00That was unexpected and brutal....well written,That was unexpected and brutal....well written,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70263513386308938202015-10-02T02:19:01.569+01:002015-10-02T02:19:01.569+01:00Oh my word...chillingly sad...totally tragic...goo...Oh my word...chillingly sad...totally tragic...good writeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-79043625400593771102015-10-02T00:00:02.894+01:002015-10-02T00:00:02.894+01:00The ending is very tragic Anna ~ Why not wait for...The ending is very tragic Anna ~ Why not wait for spring, like I do for winter here is very long ~ I like your poem very much ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-47027146545118409692015-10-01T23:12:50.290+01:002015-10-01T23:12:50.290+01:00Chilling Anna, you did also catch me on the hop he...Chilling Anna, you did also catch me on the hop here, with what is very telling and beautifully achieved piece... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70601769597148260532015-10-01T22:43:03.609+01:002015-10-01T22:43:03.609+01:00Around here, in rainy gray Western WA, people get ...Around here, in rainy gray Western WA, people get SAD, seasonal adaptive disorder--or some such. I have perfected a plethora of indoor hobbies that carry me through, not having to emerge from my corners of the man cave until the sun does. Boredom & depression are not allowed within my clubhouse of Me.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-19956682574376716062015-10-01T22:38:24.335+01:002015-10-01T22:38:24.335+01:00Oh.. fall of depression
oh.. fall of spring
oh.. r...Oh.. fall of depression<br />oh.. fall of spring<br />oh.. rise of Life<br />possible<br />any <br />Now..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-33168856442874489922015-10-01T21:50:11.505+01:002015-10-01T21:50:11.505+01:00And this is an apt reminder of why I miss your reg...And this is an apt reminder of why I miss your regular links....so very sad but when it is that bad, spring is an eternity away and not just a few months.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-49143788884459304582015-10-01T21:10:23.736+01:002015-10-01T21:10:23.736+01:00Oh, that ending chills me. I wasn't expecting...Oh, that ending chills me. I wasn't expecting this....but you have written her pain so well! Very effective.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-22996794794340411052015-10-01T20:59:50.867+01:002015-10-01T20:59:50.867+01:00oh heck... like björn i wanted to shout "don&...oh heck... like björn i wanted to shout "don't do it!!"<br />it is tough when someone sees no way to carry on anymore - i can not even imagine what she was going throughClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3139696084392272622.post-70626459867944114992015-10-01T20:53:36.119+01:002015-10-01T20:53:36.119+01:00That black dog of the night and the end gave me sh...That black dog of the night and the end gave me shivers.. and i wanted to cry: "don't do it, don't do it"... spring will come again.. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com