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| Ponytail by Last Exit |
She self-observes,
she is beautiful,
a looking-glass of pure perfection,
black swirls of hair ‘gainst fair complexion
Self-absorbed she valourises,
Recognises desirability epitomised,
sylph-like, dainty light and airy,
the pretty-looking f***ng fairy,
contrary to appearance
her ugliness is in her vices,
she entices passing souls
to taste her spices,
hot she is and seals the fate
of those who yield to sultry kiss,
and simmering, full of hate
of those she despises
slices visceral
and heart excises.
She somatises stolen hearts;
deep underground in her darkest places,
she savours it, the heart that is,
it thumps in her, the heart that is,
naked beating heart plucked out
with sultry kiss on willing faces;
driven to destroy she romantacises
love freely given is free for taking,
taking riven minds and hearts forsaking.
She departmentalises,
subdivides her life in seamless layers,
compartmentalises lurid love affairs
mind all neat and tidy.
Self-absorbed she valourises,
recognises the perfection she epitomises
opens up her cruel heart
and slowly pulls others lives
apart.
apart.
Anna :o]
Mindlovemisery has us composing using the following
words: Naked, sylph, somatic, underground, depart, light, passing, tether,
entice, seamless. Tess at The Mag kindly
provides the image and Poets United have kindly opened the Pantry.
Psychology Today: Narcissistic personality disorder.
26 comments:
This is fabulous Annah wow you have capture a Narcissistic personality perfectly and despite her evil nature you will manage to make her alluring! I love the "f***ng fairy" lol
I love the darkness this spring succubi possesses, the dark twin, so healthy cor her to see some light, like electricity , she has uses, messages to send. I wont be offended if you write " fucking" so well done, powerful , thanks
what a wicked & sad person she is...tearing others lives and hearts apart to feed her own...but i have known a few...
Wow, that is quite a character study. Self absorbed and cruel. Not someone I would care to meet but well created.
This is wonderful--a scary little write--and I loved it
That's one scary lady - hope she's pure imagination...
That's exactly what I was gonna say!! Especially that part about valorizing--or what ever.
I saw this prompt, and knew you'd find your way here. :)
Love your poem (and my thesaurus)! I probably didn't spell that right.
Cogent, compelling, powerful...
Hoping to not cross paths with this lady!
Yes, I really like your interesting poem about this woman narcissist!
imaginative...
Hey! Hey! Loved the dark depths to this poem so much, I had to read it twice. One of your very best, Anna!
What a clever twist of words, Anna!
I believe this poem is about my first wife. Hope you didn't know her and only observed from afar.
Deep words and a scary character indeed.
Something about wickedness appeals to us deep down to us!
Into my computer file, "Writing by Others," containing only special favorites your wondrous poem has been saved. I cannot believe how perfectly you described this woman. And I learned a new word valourize). :)
Eek! This reads like a frightening fairy tale or a witch's spell! I love the repetition. Really drives the message home.
I know someone like this...best stay away...
The real beauty shines from inside .
Narcissistic personality so it is! She can be a disruptive element to those around! Nicely Anna!
Hank
The new prompt is up Annah =)
sultry kiss is a dangreous thing then? i should beware of a kiss especially from a fairy :) nicely put into words once again with equally matching image :)
You've captured that sort of person beautifully!
Madeleine Begun Kane
she's a web of mystery..
dark and enticing.. you described her so well
specially loved the opening lines of ever stanza
Wonder where exactly runs the fine line between natural egoism everyone possesses and narcissism. A beautiful piece of writing.
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