The squiggly presentation was
the hallmark of Daphne’s chirography, unmistakable to him; his heart
skipped a beat and then thumped on his chest wall as if begging him to read the
beauty and wisdom of her words now! Of course he
did.
She was a difficult one and
getting her to put pen to paper was more than a little velitation, more so
full battle requiring he and his lab assistants to goad her relentlessly (he
was surprised at his ready ability to be cruel) and once enraged the words
would eruct from her like some volcano simmering below the surface,
suddenly spewing forth its matter in a violent torrent.
Her work was a strange
masterpiece indeed for not only was she the subject of his research, clever
little thing that she was, she was actually writing his research
paper too. He could visualise it being poured over,
scrutinised by his peers and then the acclaim, the acclaim, the acclaim!
He felt a smug smile crease
his face, he sniggered; he had taken literally the challenge of the idiom "that a half-dozen monkeys provided
with typewriters would, in a few eternities, produce all
the books in the British Museum ." It was not that he expected her to scribe a
full library, rather a single tome of exquisite beauty, bursting at the seams
with infinite wisdom.
Only difference was, he had given her a cheap biro and no other monkeys or
eternities needed thank you very much – just regular shocks from a cattle prod, until
painfully defeated, she came up (screeching) with the goods.
Anna :o]
Shared with the good folk at Poets & Storytellers United hosted by
the lovely Magaly, cheers Magaly!
Author: New York Zoological
Society
19 comments:
What a touching and involving story
Now I want the next chapter, where she turns on him! Heck, I want the whole novel; I'm totally engaged.
Echoing the above comments--I'm ready for Daphne to turn the tables.
He better watch it or she might write the truth.
You know that now we won't stop wondering about Daphne's writings, right? I wonder if she is going to write specific things about his research. It would be great and interesting to read her opinions of the him. Also, I just love the way you took a well known idiom and turned it into something new. I always appreciate that kind of magic.
All hail Daphne!!
I feel for her, may she get her revenge. There is something of Daphne here that reminds me of a twisted Pygmalion story.
Clearly, we're all cheering for Daphne. Hope you keep writing about her.
I hope Daphne discovers reading as well as writing so she can best plot out a way towards liberty (and possibly revenge).
Great story. Thanks.
Well this was fun! Hope to see Daphne again!
Oh yes, may Daphne return. Love the story!
Hi Anna, this was getting my attention big time as I e always liked the monkeys at the typewriters bit. But I was shocked when the cattle prod use jumped in. I suppose it had been before but we weren't privileged to know about that.
Best wishes with your writing. Best selller? We will hope.
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Go go Daphne! Get revenge and give us more of the story.
I'm with everyone else here...rooting for the revenge sequel!
Love the simple reveal in the end. What's in store next, Anna?
Could be a good metaphor for our treatment of nature...not to mention our experimentation on primates and other animals. Wonder what goods would arise were Daphne given a true place of honour? So much potential here.
I don't know whether to laugh or cry. A little of both, I think. Laughter at Daphne's success. Tears because, well, humanity...
Somewhere in the background of this story I'm hearing Roald Dahl clumping ...
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