Sunday, 26 April 2020

Alex


He is wise, wise and wizened;
hair thinning, salt and pepper seasoned;
brow lined and furrowed,   quizzical? 
Brows: bushy, grey and wiry;
eyes blue and vision fading;
nose: large and Roman
(now too long and thin (he thinks) -
My, I can almost see where bone blanches skin). 
Cheeks: skin thick and craggy;
mouth small, pursed and wrinkled;
chin cleft, stubble sprinkled.

Ah, and below the chin –
the bugger that will be the death of him. 
Untreated – he too old (he thinks)
for wrath of radiation beam
or cruel brunt of surgeons knife.

So this is he, this is who he is
above the faltering heart in heaving chest –
his face an echo - a diary of a life well-lived. 
His mouth clenching pipe, pipe-puffing,
puffing pipe (vanilla flavour and aroma)
he reminisces on the joys of yesteryears. 
He is alone – yet not lonely,
his memories’ - companions of his past and present. 

(He sips Jack Daniels – no, swigs it back,
his body welcoming each soothing warming mouthful.)

He thinks: if death comes tonight I hope it comes easy –
no crushing pain of heart arrest…  

But should he be blessed to live another day,
to see tomorrow – he will live it for the love of it. 
But should he not he knows    (yes he knows)
that those that gather grimly at his graveside
to pay homage to his passing spirit,
will sigh,    smile and softly say: 

Ah Alex,
he lived life for the love of it.

Anna :o]

An oldie regurgitated and shared in these strange times.
Stay safe!

Shared with the good folk at Poets and Storytellers United, hosted by the lovely Magaly – cheers Magaly!

Also shared with the good folk at dVerse OLN, hosted by the lovely Kim- cheers Kim!

Image:  Courtesy of  Wikimedia Commons

18 comments:

Marja said...

Love this. Poignant and a brilliant description of this character

Kim M. Russell said...

An excellent word portrait, Anna! I like the alliteration in ‘wise, wise and wizened’, and the repetition of ‘wise’ makes it conversational, as if you are talking to me. I like the aside in parenthesis, which is also conversational, and the way the portrait builds, words like daubs of paint on a canvas, with so much detail, especially in the lines:
‘Ah, and below the chin –
the bugger that will be the death of him.
Untreated – he too old (he thinks)
for wrath of radiation beam
or cruel brunt of surgeons knife’.
I love the phrase ‘a diary of a life well-lived’.

Old Egg said...

This is what we all should be...individuals with our own character and living our lives as we want to!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Such a beautiful, loving tribute / portrait. I enjoyed getting to know Alex here.

Rommy said...

This is just such a fun word portrait! I really enjoyed the tone and the wry observations.

Magaly Guerrero said...

There is so much power in living one's "life for the love of it". And the magnitude of that power (the great and the not so great bits) show on our skins, in our hearts, in the way we smile (or not).

I really like how much you were able to tell us through through the subject's physical description.

C. Sandlin said...

Beautiful, breathing portrait.

Gillena Cox said...

This character come across as one who has not wasted but lived life within the confines of his time
A lovely write Anna, thanks for sharing

Much💙love

indybev said...


What delicious descriptive words until alas! I feel I knew Alex well! Makes me want to find an interesting portrait and wax poetic!

Myrna R. said...

How nice it would be to know Alex during his life or after. You paint as beautiful a picture as the actual painting. Enjoyed this.

Wendy Bourke said...

A wonderfully drawn word portrait … compelling and authentic.

dsnake1 said...

what a warm and beautiful portrait of a person, and a unique character at that.

Joel (@Stranded Tree) said...

"his memories’ - companions of his past and present." Companions that I hope were good to him. This is a wonderful tribute and thank you for sharing.

Thotpurge said...

So much respect for people who find the spirit to live life for the love of it..how beautiful that is!

Glenn Buttkus said...

We who are already in the autumn of our lives can fully appreciate this portrait and tribute to the human spirit. Every dawn above ground is a precious gem. Every moment of the Now is rife with its challenges, but honied with every ragged breath taken .

Kerfe said...

My grandfather used to say that any day you get out of bed is a good day...I suspect this man believes that as well.

Frank Hubeny said...

Nice description: "wrath of radiation beam". I like the thought of him being alone but not lonely.

The Bizza said...

Ah, this is brilliant and meditative. A life well-lived.

I especially liked:

"He is alone – yet not lonely,
his memories’ - companions of his past and present."