Stripped bare
By autumns theft,
Skeletal now
Her frigid branches
Ache
To touch the warmth
Of rising Sol.
Dormouse, dormant
Curled deep
In winters sleep
Scratched out by
Hungry Fox.
Opportunist he,
He watches waiting
As Redbreast bobs
Through evergreen
Bearing
Seasons berries.
And distracted by
Her luscious feast of
Rich red rubies
Becomes easy fare
Feathers
On his winter table.
Jingle Poetry at Gooseberry Gardens prompt is: Snow, December, Winter Vacations and Wildness.
Also posted re The Poetry Pantry # 80 at Poets United.
Also posted re The Poetry Pantry # 80 at Poets United.
I must admit to being lazy and
Merry Christmas folks!
Anna :o]
34 comments:
Writing poems is so much more interesting than "getting ready for Christmas" (whatever that means. Well, I guess it means what I'm not doing now). Lovely poem. Thank you!
Merry Christmas to you too. Have a good one!
A haiku for you, Anna. All the best
Expectation seeds
Hope, ever optimistic
New Year then new spring
merry xmas... have anice time... and never mind..i read it again with renewed vigour :)
And Merry Christmas to you and your family Anna, this is a beautiful poem :-)
Delightful, whenever written.
Merry Christmas, Anna :)
It's the thought that counts, not when you had it! (I just added that last part--pretty clever, I'm thinkin!) Nicely done, Anna!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
I really liked this poem. Very descriptive of winter and the winter activities of the sly fox.
remarkable,
you write well.
:)
"autumn's theft" sure made me smile that phrase
happy gooseberry day!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
interesting reflection on the concept of eat-&-be-eaten
Happy Holidays!
A great seasonal poem.
This is beautifully penned. Some real poetry here
nice...lovely verse...you set the scene well...and at least he died content eh? merry christmas to you.
Thank you so much for your kind comments folks and I sincerely hope you have a superb Christmas!
Anna :o]
A real joy to read. It has done as much to put me in the Christmas mood (whatever that is) as anything yet this time around. Lovely. Particularly fine: the last stanza.
A lovely encapsulation of moments in the life (and death) of winter. Wonderful imagery in this one, Anna.
Best wishes for wonderful Christmas!
beautiful entry, thrilled to see you share.
:)
Hi Anna .. love the poem - describes Winter and this time of year wonderfully well .. so it's Mr Fox who's been getting the pigeons? .. I hope there aren't any robins in the hedges.
Have a very happy and merry seasonal break .. and a successful 2012 - cheers Hilary
Quite a vivid picture you've created in this poem. Merry Christmas to you!
merry christmas to you as well anna..a wonderful and rich winter snapshot..
I love this winter picture you paint and the reality of wildlife survival during the difficult days of lack.
I love this, Anna. It is tightly woven and evocative of so many traditional winter scenes. Surprised you actually penned it in May... funny!
This is lovely, Anna (but not so much for the Robin!)
All best from your hairy man, Timoteo!
Thanks for your very welcome comments folks.
Have a brilliant Christmas!
Anna :o]
Another read and it's even better.
All the blessings of the season to you and yours.
What a beautiful poem reflecting the season and natures response to it. OK, I was a little peeved that the Robin succumbed to the wily fox but in the heat of Christmas in Australia it is lovely to be reminded of my earlier years in the UK. Happy Christmas and thank you for your visit to the start of my adventure with Io.
Cheers Dave and oldegg!
It's nearly that time (Christmas dinner!)...
Anna :o]
My daughter is experimenting with her first English winter after a lifetime in Australia. Your poignant poem suits our mood her in sunny Sydney as we Christmas without her.
Light the fire and enjoy your Christmas dinner! :-)
Re-Gifter!
This is a lovely poem regardless of the time of year.
Merry Christmas!
Cheers,
Mark
merry Christmast !
and i must say, this one is a deep poem :)
keep writing
Thank you for your kind comments Ursula, Mark and amira.
Anna :o]
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