Insightful, very nicely phrased...
Very erotic -- well done
Love your take on this prompt and the ending sentence!
Truly a well thought out gem of a poem to accompany the picture!
what an invitation....to swim in me and understand....deep intimacy in that....
Whoa..... Quite an invitation. Too much imagery for this old Broad. Ha Ha
Human and world as one and sensual. Great write.
Ooh, this is lovely, Anna.
Well done!! Perfect for the picture you found.
You are very persuasive:)
Really enjoyed your take on this prompt. Nicely done personification.
Your metaphor is strong and true. You waste no words or phrases, yet give us the complete view. Well done.
And that is how true love should be Anna! Beautiful!!
your love letter in poetry tells about your desires and your feelings to all who happen to be around you.Good work!!!!!
Who could resist an invitation like that? LOL :)
Great take on the prompt :)
"ford my streams" "I am your world."She is asking for what is hers. I like it.
Ha ha, wow. I showed this to my partner. We agree, it's an incredible write. The ideas were great, the concision was great.
Anna that is cogent and very romantic. The length suits perfectly. Nicely done. Made me smile for sure. Good new my blogs's back up and I'm doin' the thang again. They transferred me to another server, it looks ok.Warmest,Luke
Thank you for your kind and welcome comments folks.So glad you're back Luke!Anna :o]
Oh, love this :)...very sensual too.
'I am your world'...as it should be. Lovely!
..intimately wanting and engaging... what a brilliant take Anna... smiles...
Wow ... this was so romantic .. .loved it !!!
Ditto what Jinksy said:Who could resist an invitation like that?I really enjoyed this !! Well Done !!
This is such a beautiful piece."There are rivers running beneath my skin / tides pulsing in my veines / and this sunken continent / encumbering my footsteps"
Thank you for your kind comments folks.Anna :o]
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