Monday, 10 December 2012

I Am


I am.

Discover me,
chart me, map me out. 
Climb my mountains,
ford my streams,
swim my seas. 
Love me,
let me live inside your heart. 

I am your world.

Anna :o]

With thanks to Tess at The Mag for the inspiration.   Also linked to the Poetry Pantry at Poets United.

29 comments:

Berowne said...

Insightful, very nicely phrased...

Sabio Lantz said...

Very erotic -- well done

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Love your take on this prompt and the ending sentence!

Mary said...

Truly a well thought out gem of a poem to accompany the picture!

Brian Miller said...

what an invitation....to swim in me and understand....deep intimacy in that....

She Writes said...

Perfect fit.

Manzanita said...

Whoa..... Quite an invitation. Too much imagery for this old Broad. Ha Ha

anthonynorth said...

Human and world as one and sensual. Great write.

thingy said...

Ooh, this is lovely, Anna.

Kiana said...

Well done!! Perfect for the picture you found.

Cressida de Nova said...

You are very persuasive:)

Poet Laundry said...

Really enjoyed your take on this prompt. Nicely done personification.

Kim Nelson said...

Your metaphor is strong and true. You waste no words or phrases, yet give us the complete view. Well done.

Carrie Burtt said...

And that is how true love should be Anna! Beautiful!!

TariqMian said...

your love letter in poetry tells about your desires and your feelings to all who happen to be around you.
Good work!!!!!

Jinksy said...

Who could resist an invitation like that? LOL :)

Tigerbrite said...

Great take on the prompt :)

Magaly Guerrero said...

"ford my streams"
"I am your world."

She is asking for what is hers. I like it.

Jack said...

Ha ha, wow. I showed this to my partner. We agree, it's an incredible write. The ideas were great, the concision was great.

Luke Prater said...

Anna that is cogent and very romantic. The length suits perfectly. Nicely done. Made me smile for sure. Good new my blogs's back up and I'm doin' the thang again. They transferred me to another server, it looks ok.

Warmest,

Luke

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you for your kind and welcome comments folks.

So glad you're back Luke!

Anna :o]

Daydreamertoo said...

Oh, love this :)...very sensual too.

Other Mary said...

'I am your world'...as it should be. Lovely!

Kelvin S.M. said...

..intimately wanting and engaging... what a brilliant take Anna... smiles...

Green Speck said...

Wow ... this was so romantic .. .loved it !!!

eclipseofthemoon said...

Beautiful!

cloudfactor5 said...

Ditto what Jinksy said:
Who could resist an invitation like that?
I really enjoyed this !! Well Done !!

Martin said...

This is such a beautiful piece.

"There are rivers running beneath my skin / tides pulsing in my veines / and this sunken continent / encumbering my footsteps"

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you for your kind comments folks.

Anna :o]