Nylon admiral really quite admirable
sails briny galaxies surfs bluest sea.
Nylon admiral really quite admirable,
ex-electronic castaway, now PC.
Sails on his gigabytes’ into the starry night
seemingly nonchalant but always on guard,
to save him from his personal hell relies on his
personnel, step forward please Jean-Luc Pil-Chard
Jean-Luc Pil-Chard the master of his bridge and crew,
earthy and unearthly the stuff of female dreams.
Jean-Luc Pil-Chard the master of his bridge and crew,
seemingly nonchalant but naught is what it seems.
Starfish Enterprise
pursued by Borg Cube how Kafkaesque.
Starfish Enterprise
Pil –Chard assimilated how grotesque
Cyborg sea-dog relishes his tasty dish:
Starfish Enterprise
Cyborg sea-dog relishes his tasty dish:
Pil-Chard assimilated, me oh my!
Anna :o]
Inspired by Izzy at Real Toads who has us using lines from Future Sailors and for Thom at Three Word Wednesday who has us using Earthy Grotesque and Nonchalant -Thanks Izzy and Thom!
14 comments:
Anna
So fun to read and I love all the playful futuristic nods! I enjoyed your poem!
Bravo
ha. some great word play in this anna....nice bend toward star trek as well...lol....got to watch assimilation for sure...the kafka borg cube is a great touch too...
WOW!
Yes nicely done..the pilchards made me :) ..we have pilchard issues here in the nut house.. nobody wants to eat them but it's that's in the cupboard to eat..bloody things..should be blasted into space..
I love the word play here and the originality :)
What excellent parody of the whole Star Trek thing - and with the jaunty rhythm of a sea shanty too.
As an old star trek and Jean Luke fan, I enjoyed this morphing of it into the sea focused prompt.
Fabulous. I love the rhythm and rhymes, and of course the "Starfish Enterprise"!
This is very, very well done.
K
What a delight for your readers to have you play with us in this way.
Excellent! Of course anything that starts with the Mighty Boosh is bound to be entertaining. This totally fits.
Even more exciting when read aloud!
Thank you for your kind and welcome comments folks.
Anna :o]
hey anna,
I love this!!! of course I am a MIGHTY Boosh fan and I love this as a set-up/intro . . .
Starfish Enterprise sails briny blue galaxies
pursued by Borg Cube how Kafkaesque.
YES! fantastic and I love the bounce here on borg and dog -
Cyborg sea-dog relishes his tasty dish:
fun, funny, smart and a great read!!!
This is so charming Anna and so much fun =)
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