She had heard it all before. "Déjà moo. Déjà
moo," she sneered in a dreary bored tone that perfectly reflected her
present feelings for him. Bastard!
Bastard! Bastard! “You drink too much and I hate you when
you’re like this!” he had said as he pushed her away.
She had loved him and still did, oh
how much she still wanted him,
arsehole that he was. Like her, he was a
member of the burgeoning community of ad hoc families that were spreading like
an unwanted disease in the empty houses that littered the right side of town. The more
the squatters moved in, the more those who considered themselves respectable
moved out.
He didn’t understand that drink
sharpened her mind, made her more creative, esemplastic as her diverse
extraordinary thoughts melded into one.
He didn’t realise that she needed the
drink to create her masterpiece.
She gazed at him scornfully as he lay
stoned sleeping on the bare mattress, sharing his bed with fellow half-stoned
druggies, life’s freeloaders and gypsy hearts that inhabited their sleazy
little world. Bloody hypocrite!
Bastard,
bastard, bastard!, she
thought as she staggered over to the dark corner that served as her “office”
slugging at the bottle that served her imagination. Bastard,
bastard, bastard! I’ll show ya! I’ll write the damn book! She took the grubby sheet of A4 and slid it
into the old pink typewriter and her fingers began touch typing, tapping out
her masterpiece.
Capter One
Christine decide
yjsy djr epi;f yitm dkre[o’fyoymjker … … … …
… … … …
Anna :o]
(This is not about me she said (hic!))
Shared with the good folk at the
Writers Pantry #7 at Poets and Storytellers United, hosted by the lovely
Sanaa.- cheers Sanaa!
Image:
Courtesy of Flickr Creative
Commons, "drunk unicorn" by Tom Frisch is
licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 2.0
21 comments:
Great last line. I can write like that without drink or drugs at times. Nice one.
Sometimes we need to shut out the negativity that surrounds us in order to follow our calling. The girl in the story is determined and strong. I am sure she will get through!💝 Cheers, Anna!🍹
I don't need drink to type like that either. My fingers do it on their own, or with the help of the Kindle gremlins!
Oh that post script is fantastic!
You sent me to the dictionary with "esemplastic"! A dark tale with a kicker ending!
All the stories buried in that last line...
Yup--many a writer has written stories that started with this last line I think--great write!
Hard to know whether to laugh or cry.
She's going to be awfully disappointed in the morning ... she'll need a drink to console herself....
Thank goodness drink mostly knocks me out, or who knows what sort of crazy might spring forth from my keyboard.
Wow the lazt 😊 ljne helped me to exhale
Much❤love
This was a delight to read. Lol!!.."Capter One"....made me laugh, as well as the genius writing that follows :)
I'm reading this while having a pint. Is there some sort of duality here?
A bit of a sad story but a chuckle at the end. Well done.
I am sure she will love what she has written even though no one else does! What a good laugh!
Gonna tell on him? They were made for each other!
oh, i write like that sometimes, and i am not even been drinking. :)
i guess each one has their special way of coaxing their muse.
great story! "deja moo", i like that.
Love it...although I can type like that stone sober. I do have a glass of wine on occasion to lure my muse into giving me words to write.
I like this chapter, Anne.
There but for a couple of women's love and Gid's desire would be me. I had written about your characters but Google shut me down when I refused the B word that your heroine used your times in a row. Yes, lots of scooters around U.K, London, I know.
I like this chapter, Anne.
There but for a couple of women's love and God's desire would be me. I had written about your characters but Google shut me down when it refused the B word that your heroine used four times in a row.
Yes, lots of scooters around U.K, London, I know.
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I love it, Anna. The ending got me. hugs! heidi
You must be writing a book - interesting.
I love this, Anna. Never push your lifestyle opinions on anyone.
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