As mean as any howling cur, that’s him
an’ I seen what he done to her,
that one we thought the sweetest thing
who refused his plea to be his wife,
an’ he as mad as hell, he slapped her hard
an’ screaming to the floor she fell.
An’ he with keenest butchers eye
took hand his favoured sharpest knife
an’ plunged it deep in t'cavity
where we thought her beating heart would be.
An’ to our horror ‘twas just a stone
laying cold an’ hard twixt flesh an’ bone
an’ she with the wildest eyes I’ve ever known
let out this god-awful ear piercing moan,
grabbed at his knife and stabbed at him,
stabbed at him ‘til she could stab no more,
then curled back her lips an’ ate him raw.
Me master gone then she turned on me,
you’re next she screeched an’ tried to cut me up
an’ I bit her hard an’ she lost her grip
an’ I took a chance and fled as fast can be.
An’ courage now almost drained from me
I hide quivering whimpering like some discarded pup,
hoping life be bled from me an’ I be long dead and gone
‘fore she finds my scent ‘fore she hounds me out
'fore she curls back her lips and eats me up.
'fore she curls back her lips and eats me up.
Anna :o]
This gruesome tale (which still requires a bit of tinkering) was inspired by the image provided
by Tess at The Mag. Also entered at The Poetry Pantry at Poets United, kindly hosted by Mary; thanks Tess and Mary!
21 comments:
What a vivid description of the events and it is a gripping tale, makes the reader to know more, what happened next....keep it up!!
Direful tale - but very well written.
Oh wow lots of emotions reading this...fascinating :)
Whew...talk about eerie. This was really a chilling read. Well presented, but chilling.
dang....vivid....the stabbing and then eating....hope they get away...the stone heart too...whew...nice touch...smiles.
Great poem , really very tragic and heartbreaking !
Seas of passion's blood! B-e-a-t-i-f-u-l!
When finally
The mask fell
Placid he is not
Sweet she ain't
It was rejection
that gave him strength
To tear at her heart
Find out for himself
If instead
Lives a stone
"Oh you can't do that"
She whispered
As she tore him limp from limp
Devoured him piece by piece
Witness
Animal could not comprehend
Animals covered in red
In heaven
Terrified
It ran away
From the scene
Of the horrendous massacre ..
;-)
This is a very chilling tale Anna!
Wow. Enthralling horror story. Really well done. Thank you.
Excellent writing! I love dark!
doggy tales
Fascinating stuff. sounds like the Banshee :)
Scary!
I like the ballad-like feel to this...
Seems they bit off more than they could chew !
A very good tale. Pretty scary.
The tone... the dialect.. I love this.. could be a song by Nick Cave from Murder Ballads... Stabbing and eating... really greatly gruesome
This is gruesome and vivid!
A wonderful piece indeed! I loved it well.
Yikes! I never considered gory stories from a dog's point of view...
Very appropriate for the season. ;) I enjoyed the dialect and pov very much. Wonderful!
You have frightened me, Anna! I am relieved that I am reading this in the morning instead of before bed. I hope the dog escapes.
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