HyperCRYPTICal: Sweet Falls The Rain

Monday, 26 September 2011

Sweet Falls The Rain

Dark clouds may hide the sun,
Cold winds bite at my flesh
Yet I am not afraid.

Sweet falls the rain
Cleansing my soul,
Heaven at my fingertips.

Anna :o]

With thanks to Tess at Magpie Tales for the inspiration.

27 comments:

Isabel Doyle said...: lovely & optimistic; 26 September 2011 at 09:51
kaykuala said...: Anna.
The rain ever so forgiving, giving life and solace in spite of dark clouds. Beautiful verse!

Hank; 26 September 2011 at 11:34
jabblog said...: Simple and direct - I like it.; 26 September 2011 at 12:17
Tarang Sinha said...: Nice. I liked the last line.; 26 September 2011 at 12:28
Jinksy said...: There's positive thinking for you...; 26 September 2011 at 13:32
Lyn said...: I love the optimism..always the winner!!; 26 September 2011 at 14:10
Brian Miller said...: nice...there is beauty in allowing the rain to wash it all from us so that we are once more refreshed...; 26 September 2011 at 14:25
Martin said...: Sometime the elements can feel like "Heaven at my fingertips."; 26 September 2011 at 17:03
Sean Vessey said...: Beautiful - "Heaven at my fingertips "
Thank you for sharing.
:-); 26 September 2011 at 17:06
Tess Kincaid said...: My sentiments exactly...; 26 September 2011 at 18:06
Helen said...: 'Sweet' indeed .........; 26 September 2011 at 18:10
Frances Garrood said...: Lovely - especially the last line!; 26 September 2011 at 18:15
Kathy B. said...: I liked the toothsomeness of your biting and then sweet images.; 26 September 2011 at 22:24
Maggie said...: Aah, such tenderness and hope in this. Love it.; 27 September 2011 at 01:38
Chronicles of Illusions said...: optimism and simplicity combined; 27 September 2011 at 02:43
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Thanks for you kind comments folks.

I love the rain, yet not so much on a cold winters day.

Anna :o]; 27 September 2011 at 09:52
Misterio Vida said...: ah..beautifully written...also it shows how bad the situation is, one should never lose hope :); 28 September 2011 at 21:22
Intelliblog said...: This was a dark and ominous image and yet you have successfully turned it around into a prompt for great positivity. Beautiful poem!; 28 September 2011 at 23:04
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Thank you Muhammad and Nicholas.

Anna :o]; 29 September 2011 at 11:29
Words A Day said...: Sweet falls the rain
Thats a lovely line:); 30 September 2011 at 12:01
Susie Clevenger said...: Something positive from a dark image :); 30 September 2011 at 21:50
Helena said...: A carefree 'soak-me-if-you-like' attitude. That's a winner!; 1 October 2011 at 21:20
Lolamouse said...: beautiful!!!; 1 October 2011 at 22:24
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Thank you so much for your kind comments folks.

Anna :o]; 1 October 2011 at 22:30
The PostMan said...: Lovely.

Regards
The PostMan
http://postcardsinthewind.blogspot.com/; 2 October 2011 at 13:21
Yve said...: Very pretty. It made me feel the cold rain; and I needed that. It's so hot over here!; 2 October 2011 at 22:20
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Thank you The Postman and Lazidaisical for your kind comments.

Anna :o]; 5 October 2011 at 22:15

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