Monday, 26 September 2011

Sweet Falls The Rain

Dark clouds may hide the sun,
Cold winds bite at my flesh
Yet I am not afraid.

Sweet falls the rain
Cleansing my soul,
Heaven at my fingertips.

Anna :o]

With thanks to Tess at Magpie Tales for the inspiration.

27 comments:

Isabel Doyle said...

lovely & optimistic

kaykuala said...

Anna.
The rain ever so forgiving, giving life and solace in spite of dark clouds. Beautiful verse!

Hank

jabblog said...

Simple and direct - I like it.

Tarang Sinha said...

Nice. I liked the last line.

Jinksy said...

There's positive thinking for you...

Lyn said...

I love the optimism..always the winner!!

Brian Miller said...

nice...there is beauty in allowing the rain to wash it all from us so that we are once more refreshed...

Martin said...

Sometime the elements can feel like "Heaven at my fingertips."

Sean Vessey said...

Beautiful - "Heaven at my fingertips "
Thank you for sharing.
:-)

Tess Kincaid said...

My sentiments exactly...

Helen said...

'Sweet' indeed .........

Frances Garrood said...

Lovely - especially the last line!

Kathy Bischoping said...

I liked the toothsomeness of your biting and then sweet images.

thingy said...

Aah, such tenderness and hope in this. Love it.

Jo Bryant said...

optimism and simplicity combined

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thanks for you kind comments folks.

I love the rain, yet not so much on a cold winters day.

Anna :o]

Muhammad Israr said...

ah..beautifully written...also it shows how bad the situation is, one should never lose hope :)

Nicholas V. said...

This was a dark and ominous image and yet you have successfully turned it around into a prompt for great positivity. Beautiful poem!

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you Muhammad and Nicholas.

Anna :o]

Words A Day said...

Sweet falls the rain
Thats a lovely line:)

Susie Clevenger said...

Something positive from a dark image :)

Lena said...

A carefree 'soak-me-if-you-like' attitude. That's a winner!

Lolamouse said...

beautiful!!!

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you so much for your kind comments folks.

Anna :o]

The PostMan said...

Lovely.

Regards
The PostMan
http://postcardsinthewind.blogspot.com/

Lazidaisical said...

Very pretty. It made me feel the cold rain; and I needed that. It's so hot over here!

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you The Postman and Lazidaisical for your kind comments.

Anna :o]