lovely & optimistic
Anna.The rain ever so forgiving, giving life and solace in spite of dark clouds. Beautiful verse!Hank
Simple and direct - I like it.
Nice. I liked the last line.
There's positive thinking for you...
I love the optimism..always the winner!!
nice...there is beauty in allowing the rain to wash it all from us so that we are once more refreshed...
Sometime the elements can feel like "Heaven at my fingertips."
Beautiful - "Heaven at my fingertips "Thank you for sharing.:-)
My sentiments exactly...
'Sweet' indeed .........
Lovely - especially the last line!
I liked the toothsomeness of your biting and then sweet images.
Aah, such tenderness and hope in this. Love it.
optimism and simplicity combined
Thanks for you kind comments folks.I love the rain, yet not so much on a cold winters day.Anna :o]
ah..beautifully written...also it shows how bad the situation is, one should never lose hope :)
This was a dark and ominous image and yet you have successfully turned it around into a prompt for great positivity. Beautiful poem!
Thank you Muhammad and Nicholas.Anna :o]
Sweet falls the rainThats a lovely line:)
Something positive from a dark image :)
A carefree 'soak-me-if-you-like' attitude. That's a winner!
Thank you so much for your kind comments folks.Anna :o]
Very pretty. It made me feel the cold rain; and I needed that. It's so hot over here!
Thank you The Postman and Lazidaisical for your kind comments.Anna :o]
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