Sunday, 30 October 2011

Leaving

You whisper softly,
I shush your lips,
Brush your frown
Into a smile,
Beg you not to leave
“Please stay a while?”

You slowly raise your hand,
Fingers caress my cheek,
Eyes plead with me
To let you speak

I love you forever”
You say as you drift away,
I plead with you,
Beg you to stay.

My love, my love
I will always grieve thee
And if you truly loved me
Why did you leave me?

Anna :o]

With thanks to Claudia at dVerse Poets Pub for the inspiration

17 comments:

libithina said...

So very sad ~ if she could have, she would have stayed, I'm sure ~ as your love was profound ~
heart touched ~
~ Lib ~

Brian Miller said...

oh def sad..being seperated from the one you love is not good...been there and done that...it sucks...nice write though.

Laurie Kolp said...

Oh so sad and touching... the ending could be the chorus in a song.

kaykuala said...

Sadly some questions never get answered the way we desire.Great verse!

Hank

Claudia said...

i think sometimes loving someone can also mean leaving..it's hard though and many question will be unanswered..sad and touching lines

Isabel Doyle said...

lovely farewell - need to listen eh?
beautiful lines

lynne said...

Oh my.. the longing and sorrow is palpable..I have to wonder why our hearts are tested ..

sad, but good poem!!

somewhereamelody said...

A tender poem full of longing.
Lovley flow and a beautiful take on the prompt.

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully poignant.

manicddaily said...

Of course, this reminded me of the feelings one has when a loved one died--what you may have meant--though it can be much wider.

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you for your kind comments folks.

manicddaily ~ yes, it was about death (which always comes too soon for the observer (who loves - as in friendship)), the passing of man I had great feelings for.

Anna :o]

Mama Zen said...

This is so tender and sad!

Christine said...

this feels very much like deaths goodbye, very sad

darkangelwrites said...

Heart wrenching, sigh...

Sweeter said...

It's kinda of common this to happen... but not so common to find beautiful ways to express the feeling.
Just beautiful!

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Thank you for your kind comments folks - unable to write this sooner as PC problems and now working on borrowed laptop.

Anna :o]

Jenny Woolf said...

Sad and poignant, a visiting ghost.