When
the End came,
this
final End,
we
were biting at our nails,
chewing
on our lips,
tugging
at the memories of our mothers skirts,
waiting
the safe embrace of our long-dead fathers.
Greed
had long left us hungry,
famine
had devoured us;
thirst
had left us dry,
our
bodies shrivelling under the sun.
Hunger,
conflict had scorched this earth, robbing
men
of their hearts and us of our future,
our
mothers raped, tortured, killed,
left
to desiccate on this barren land,
ghosts
they became,
ghosts
of what was,
ghosts
of what is.
We
became carrion feeders,
teeth
tearing at the souls of the dead,
sating
our hunger with flesh,
our teeth
grinding on their bones,
the
bones the flesh of our mothers our fathers,
our
brothers our sisters,
our
friends, of strangers, of enemies -
for
in us is a will to survive,
a
will to live.
When
only the living remained
we
ate each other
and
we began to eat ourselves,
one hungry
mouthful at a time.
There
are other predators,
those
who are stronger than us.
The
dogs are the worse,
savage
in their packs,
as
savage as we have become,
maybe
always were..
I
think they will inherit this earth;
they
have the teeth for it,
the
hunger.
Anna
:o]
If I
were one of the last survivors in this possible future world, the dogs would
worry me very much, oh so very much…
Also shared with the good folk at Poets United. Cheers for hosting Mary.
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31 comments:
It's a dogs life, under such circumstances. You've told us what has happened, and you start out with such strong immediate images, but after that there's a remove, a recitation of what has happened instead of putting the reader there. "Show don't tell" is an annoying cliche, but has some validity, too.
My goodness you paint a very sombre and very real picture of circumstances our world might have to face if we are not careful. Powerful write.
I watched a pack of dogs tear a cat apart before I could rescue it. The tearing the dogs did put me in mind of that horror. I never thought of dogs inheriting the earth but you make a valid, frightening point for it.
Oh, this is so grim, but fantastic in its portrayal of such grimness that may perchance be ahead of us towards the end. Haunting and powerful in equal measures, I really enjoyed it. Very well-penned.
-HA
This makes me shiver to read because we are closer to this kind of chaos than any of us might assume. Hunger, greed, dog eat dog, man eat man... what an inheritance this human existence has earned.
"Greed had long left us hungry"....as it certainly will. Wow, that is a powerful line! I hope this isnt the future of mankind, but I see us on that trajectory.
from our best friend to feared beast.... very gripping.
Dread and doom, awareness is needed by those who can help, soon, soon. But their pockets are lined with gold. Our hope is that eventually they'll wake up and find gold can't be eaten.
..
A frightening prospect. I am selfishly glad that it is unlikely to be me. However, my bro in law who is a distinguished astronomer told me the other day that if something fairly small were to hit the earth we might have very little warning of it beforehand - but "fairly small" means large enough to annihilate a large city like London or Tokyo or New York. So as I understand it, it could happen next week, in theory. Eeek!
I can feel the terror in this... the self-infliction we bring upon us. I think this might absolutely happen...and the teeth will inherit the earth
The repetition of the word ghost drills a whole through the nerves, especially after hearing of the huger, after seeing the teeth... after the words remind us that we are robbed our humanity, only instinct to survive--at any cost--is left, only wild hunger.
stunning imagery
What a chilling ending, Anna! Love it. It rings true.
"I think they will inherit this earth;
they have the teeth for it,
the hunger."
Loved to read it again Anna. Somehow I think your image could fit the theme of radiation as well.
A frightening vision--I once saw a series on TV called When Humans Become Extinct--or something like that--and dogs would survive just fine in that world I think
Back for seconds.. such a powerfully written poem, Anna!
Greed breds hunger in every corner. A dark fiction well crafted. You left us biting at fingernails in dread
Thanks for dropping by my Sunday Standard today Anna
Much💞
So much terror here! I would be scared of everything...not just the dogs. This quote would bring me comfort"...tugging at the memories of our mothers skirts...". Well penned!
This is very chilling. We have long thought that we with our brains are rulers of the earth. I think, in the end, you are right. We will be destroyed by ourselves and 'dogs' of one kind or another; and it won't be pretty!
In the end there will be fighting claw and teeth and flesh...ugh..
An intense - extremely impactful - somewhat allegorical (it seems to me) cautionary tale. The writing here, is brilliant - masterful, really.
If this was metaphorical, it was incredible.
ZQ
Chilling. A theme I've noticed today.
Frightening--from the first image visceral.
and we began to eat ourselves,
one hungry mouthful at a time... dire prediction...still not hard to imagine it's where we're headed..
I think they will inherit this earth;
they have the teeth for it,
The dogs can cause damage in a wholesome way as they are able to work as a pack! No way one can survive alone!
Hank
A scary dystopia, Anna. I don't want to be around when the end comes. Not only are packs of dogs scary but there would also be rats! There are some outstanding lines in this poem - I particularly admire:
'tugging at the memories of our mothers skirts,
waiting the safe embrace of our long-dead fathers'
and
'We became carrion feeders,
teeth tearing at the souls of the dead'.
A touch of the Mad Max about this one.Never mind about the roaming dog packs I'm not looking forward to the carnage caused by driverless cars and transport.
You draw a picture I hope we never see. Very well done!
you painted a grim picture of a possible future. man's best friend, driven by hunger, could just do that. with the rats, perhaps. they multiply so quickly. :(
A horror story, all the worse for being possible.
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